Bonjour pouvez-vous m'aider à trouvez les fautes de ce texte svp ? (J'ai reposé cet question car l'image était flou) merci d'avance

Réponse:

Ligne 1: Who were ➡ which was

Ligne 3: I graduate ➡ I graduated, I has ➡ I have

Ligne 4: Four years experience of working ➡ Four years of experience, working

Ligne 5: In costumer services in company ➡ In the costumer services of a company

Ligne 7: For deal ➡ To deal

Ligne 9: I would like develop my proffessional skills ➡ I would like to develop my professional skills

Ligne 10: I am interesting ➡ I am interested, For improve ➡ To improve

Et le dernier paragraphe y'a rien qui va.

N'oublie pas que devant un verbe à l'infinitif on utilise ''to'' et non ''for''.